WRDF Review of Hot Nights With a Playboy by Nicola Marsh

6/7/08
Title: Hot Nights with a Playboy
Author: Nicola Marsh
Publisher: Mills and Boon - Modern Heat
ISBN - 978-0-263-86378-9
Length: Mid-length novel
Rating: Hot
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A nice, easy to read on the hot sands of the beach story. This story is nothing new. The characters are nothing new. The plot - best friends suddenly realize they are hot for each other - nothing new.
Still, this writer gives you the perfect beach read with sizzling romance and characters who are intriguing in that they didn’t realize they were born to love before hand.
Hitches - some of this is so horrifically redundant it is almost sad. Characters are juvenile and hard to believe. The title has absolutely nothing to do with the story.
Kudos - the story has a great pace that keeps you turning pages while basking beneath the rays. Don’t forget your sun block. So, put it in your canvas bag along with your Coppertone.







Nicola,
Be sure to listen to T.J. about the redundancy. You have to go through what you write and remove everything that says the same thing two or three times, but in different words. I do the same thing, and I always have to watch myself.
T.J., another good honest review.
Nicola, it's so hard to detect the redundancy in your own work. Have someone else look at it.
Hugs,
Sandy
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